Writing Note

If writing, in and of itself, is something that interests you, you might want to take a careful look at my use of pronouns after the “demonstration” part here. 

Consider how different (and harsh) the effect would have been had I stuck with “you”. Instead, I orchestrated a shifting cavalcade of diverse pronouns (and cagy subject avoidance) to rinse away some of the sting.

Qualifying adjectives no longer work, but pronouns, for the time being, do.